The Marauders’ Reviews:

 

 

Dear Ksomm814,

 

I would like to say that your story, Midnight Guardian, was very enticing and interesting. I thought you are a very good writer. That said, I do have to express my disappointment at being called things like murderer, Death Eater and traitor so many times. I am happy that you set the record straight at the end but I am still waiting for my full apology.

I also would like to give little writing tips. You depict your characters very well but I think I may help with some adjectives to describe a certain Potions Masters: slimy git, curtain of grease, Professor Snivellus. You can also remind him of his lack in underpants hygiene.

 

Thank you for giving my godson back to me and Moony!

Yours,

Not a murderer.

Not a Death Eater.

Not a traitor.

 

Sirius Black

 

 

Dear Ksomm814,

 

You write very well. I was always captivated by your story. But I think my son could have done without the beating and Dementors.... and Snape. On that matter I want to second my friend Sirius and add some other adjectives such as Big Nose and bat of the dungeons.

 

Thank you very much for letting me know my son since, well, you know, I am dead and all.

 

Yours sincerely,

 

James Potter

 

Dear Ksomm814,

 

You are very eloquent and catching writer. I enjoyed the experience of reading your novel. But I must say; it’s not my fault I am a werewolf! That puts a lot of stress on my body so please lay off on saying I have grey hair!

 

Sincerely,

Remus Lupin

 

Dear Ksomm814,

 

I first ask you to please disregard any ‘advice’ given by Black and Potter.

Did you have to make my baby suffer so much? He needs his mummy.

I look forward to seeing Petunia getting punished and also thank you for letting me know my baby.

 

 

Lily Evans

 

PS: And how in the world did I end up marrying Potter?

The end